https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 13:11:08 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95502 Sun, 27 Mar 2005 02:57:10 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95502 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95370 Sat, 26 Mar 2005 00:18:38 +0000
Although I like the way the "pistol" works in at the
end in the original version. Makes me wonder what
he might do with it when he gets to "feeling alone"

As for writing when you're about to fall asleep
I find that can put you in a good state of mind
for The Muse to sneak in in do her work

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95370 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95287 Fri, 25 Mar 2005 07:05:22 +0000 this is the problem when you don't start writing until you're about to fall asleep.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95287 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95280 Fri, 25 Mar 2005 05:27:54 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95280 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95264 Fri, 25 Mar 2005 02:49:18 +0000
Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95264 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95255 Fri, 25 Mar 2005 01:13:42 +0000 i'm not really happy with this song. the chorus has a different feel than the verses, and it didn't come out easily.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95255 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95246 Thu, 24 Mar 2005 23:43:32 +0000
Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95246 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95243 Thu, 24 Mar 2005 23:09:38 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95243 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95207 Thu, 24 Mar 2005 17:08:44 +0000
Works for me!!!!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-95207 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-7876 Mon, 21 Mar 2005 09:32:06 +0000 and the sun stops burnin your eyes
cornbread and beans, the coffee tastes mean
at night the stars fill up the skies

i knew that you were messing around
spending all night with my friend
well, that's what i figured when i pulled the trigger
now i'll never see you again

chorus
but forever's (never's?) not something you get used to
and the world's a mighty big place
i could keep riding forever
but i'll always remember your face

the sun rises slow on the painted desert
the coffee and cold wake my bones
the morning's crystal and i got my pistol
to keep me from feeling alone

chorus]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-20-song/#post-7876