https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 09:24:11 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-98006 Tue, 12 Apr 2005 18:36:13 +0000 you use cool imagery/pictures/phrases.

really well done&worth your time :D
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-98006 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-97817 Mon, 11 Apr 2005 07:02:14 +0000
All in all I thought the song was killer. Keep it up!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-97817 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-97809 Mon, 11 Apr 2005 05:02:27 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-97809 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-8322 Sat, 09 Apr 2005 12:30:01 +0000 the noise of creation warped dark by my pain
skittering madly through the halls of my brain
roaring like thunder and pouring like rain
the rhythm of fusion of desperate hips
drawn out and dripping from my fingers's tips
through the confusion of too many trips
as the dust of decay sprays hard from my lips

from stardust we're formed
to stardust return
and in the meantime
continue to burn

the echoes of ages, the battle of mind
leads me to slaughter, tied up and blind
through a forest of eyes where ideas bleed
and nightmares arise from the ashes of greed
the forgotten dreams of the vacant and hollow
telling their stories on voices they've borrowed
from sun-bleached souls and the ghosts of tomorrow
washed out and weary from infinite sorrow

from stardust we're formed
to stardust return
and in the meantime
continue to burn]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-burn/#post-8322