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Wow! Everybody is putting such great work this week.

This is right there with the best of them.

Good Job

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96951 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96670 Mon, 04 Apr 2005 08:00:24 +0000 Like the distance between us, no matter where you areWhere all that we believe
Comes out from the waves
That crash before our feet Awesome lines. I see everyone getting better in the SSG. Keep it up!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96670 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96645 Mon, 04 Apr 2005 04:28:36 +0000
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+]]> Sunday Songwriters Group +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96645 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96557 Sun, 03 Apr 2005 18:32:57 +0000
Very nice use of imagery, it does show a couple of signs of being rushed though....

Where all the we believe.....where all THAT we believe, for instance....

But that's just nit-picking, it's got a really nice smooth flow to it...like water over glass....

Yep, you got yourself a song here!!!! Nice one!!!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-96557 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-8149 Sun, 03 Apr 2005 17:26:33 +0000
Night Water

Standing by the water I could see the sun shine
Scattered across the surface like a blanket of light
I could see the reflection of the world passing me by
As I broke from this serenity to look towards the sky

If we could swim the open waters
To the land of our dreams
I would swim forever with you
Through every stormy sea
To the banks of sand
Where all that we believe
Comes out from the waves
That crash before our feet
In this place

I could fall into my mind behind this cloud of smoke
Fog that drifts before my eyes like all our hidden ghosts
The space between this water bank and the shining stars
Like the distance between us, no matter where you are

If we could swim the open waters
To the land of our dreams
I would swim forever with you
Through every stormy sea
To the banks of sand
Where all the we believe
Comes out from the waves
That crash before our feet
In this place]]> Sunday Songwriters Group +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-22-night-water/#post-8149