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I agree with hairballxavier, it's a beautiful song and doesn't really need any more verses etc.

I can relate to it, especially here: and my mind drifts to mortality my routine separates me from its beauty
i feel detached but i'm melancholy
the day drains and the wind blows through me also my favourite parts:)

very nice song.
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-23-song-breeze/#post-98574 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-23-song-breeze/#post-98573 Sat, 16 Apr 2005 13:51:00 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group hairballxavier https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-23-song-breeze/#post-98573 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-23-song-breeze/#post-8463 Fri, 15 Apr 2005 09:02:23 +0000
verse:
i'm sitting in the grass, playing the guitar
waiting for something new to come to me
it's a sunny day, the neighborhood's quiet
and my mind drifts to mortality

chorus:
in heaven, notes fall like feathers
laughter comes like ripples on a river
when you're home, you know it well
with the yellow sun above me
and an ephemeral melody
a breeze like this only blows through hell

verse:
i'm walking home and the world is still
my routine separates me from its beauty
i feel detached but i'm melancholy
the day drains and the wind blows through me]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-23-song-breeze/#post-8463