https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 09:54:12 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-109886 Wed, 06 Jul 2005 11:32:03 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-109886 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-109463 Sat, 02 Jul 2005 17:34:34 +0000
I like this. If I were to make one suggestion it would be on the line;
You can claim to be the ringleader. You may consider changing it to "ringmaster'' as to fit the Circus
imagery better.

Just a thought

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-109463 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-108891 Wed, 29 Jun 2005 07:58:08 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-108891 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-108810 Tue, 28 Jun 2005 23:57:39 +0000
I like your song, structurally its really well balanced. I also agree with the sentiment expressed here. I especially like the way you turn it around in verse 2 Come one and all, come to
the show you never knew.
The time is here to come to
and see the freak inside you. although the third line seems a bit awkward with the "to" , or does that mean to "come to" i.e. "wake up" ? In which case just ignore what Ive just said.

Well done :D .

pb]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-108810 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-9879 Mon, 27 Jun 2005 11:35:00 +0000
Freakshow

Come one and all and see
the sideshow of the freaks.
The ones who aren't afraid to be
different like me.

We're all alike with different likes.
We're all the same. It's what we became
that pulled us apart and made you think
I was the one to blame.
We're all alike at certain times.
Equivalent on the inside.
Same two feet, with different strides.
All the same freaks, but some denied.

You can claim to be the ringleader.
Claim to be the best.
Better than me,
better than the rest.
One glance into the mirror.
Your beauty is a lie.
We don't have to stay inside
and have something to hide.

We're all alike with different likes.
We're all the same. It's what we became
that pulled us apart and made you think
I was the one to blame.
We're all alike at certain times.
Equivalent on the inside.
Same two feet, with different strides.
All the same freaks, but some denied.

Come one and all, come to
the show you never knew.
The time is here to come to
and see the freak inside you.

We're all alike with different likes.
We're all the same. It's what we became
that pulled us apart and made you think
I was the one to blame.
We're all alike at certain times.
Equivalent on the inside.
Same two feet, with different strides.
All the same freaks, but some denied.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-34-freakshow/#post-9879