https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 14:32:30 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117727 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 07:10:12 +0000
Joe]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117727 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117716 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 06:25:31 +0000
GIVE ME TIME TO THINK, YOU SAID
HAD AN AMBER ALE INSTEAD
KNOWING YOU WOULDN'T STAY

It's a little thing, I know, but I think it adds a bit to the personality of your narrator.

Good work here and I look forward to reading more.

Peace]]> Sunday Songwriters Group David Hodge https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117716 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117687 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 04:21:33 +0000
Yeah agreeing with Vic on that line , and might I add another little tweek

you have :

"GIVE ME TIME TO THINK, YOU SAID
I HAD A DRINK INSTEAD
KNOWING YOU WOULDN'T STAY "

my change would be on the second line instead I had a drink what about you had a drink , ( instead of thinking about it she got drunk off her face and did not think about it at all ) which sort falls in line with the rest of the song .

I like it Joe :wink:

Cheers

L.K :arrow:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117687 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117673 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 01:54:54 +0000
WHO MADE YOUR BLUE EYES RED TODAY
WHEN YOU SAID YOU COULDN'T STAY

I'd change to

Who made your blue eyes red today,
When HE said you couldn't stay.....

just seems to fit better....apart from that, nice job man!!!!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-117673 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-10945 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 00:13:03 +0000 ©2005JKovak

IT'S PRETTY GRAY TODAY
YOU DIDN'T STAY TODAY

YOU SAID YOU'D SLEEP ON IT
I DIDN'T SLEEP A BIT
HOPING YOU WOULD STAY TODAY

OH IT USED TO BE ENOUGH
TO LOOK IN YOUR BLUE EYES
BELIEVE THE WORDS YOU TOLD ME
WHEN DID I BECOME THAT GUY

WHO MADE YOU BLUE TODAY
NOT BELIEVING WHAT YOU SAY

GIVE ME TIME TO THINK, YOU SAID
I HAD A DRINK INSTEAD
KNOWING YOU WOULDN'T STAY

OH IT USED TO BE ENOUGH
TO LOOK IN YOUR BLUE EYES
BELIEVE THE WORDS YOU TOLD ME
WHEN DID I BECOME THAT GUY

WHO MADE YOUR BLUE EYES RED TODAY
WHEN YOU SAID YOU COULDN'T STAY

SO MUCH I COULD'VE SAID
BUT GREEN EYES MADE ME SEE RED
THAT'S WHY YOU COULDN'T STAY TODAY

AND IT USED TO BE ENOUGH
TO LOOK IN YOUR BLUE EYES
BELIEVE THE WORDS YOU TOLD ME
WHEN DID I BECOME THAT GUY

WHO'S LIVING DAY TO DAY
AND IT'S PRETTY GRAY TODAY...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41-when-did-i-become-that-guy/#post-10945