https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 10:39:04 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383227 Tue, 20 Aug 2013 16:52:14 +0000 http://www.reverbnation.com/blueslightning http://blueslightning.com/ ther is music form the CD there and the trio as well . Sounds like your having a lot of fun 8)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383227 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383226 Tue, 20 Aug 2013 12:18:15 +0000 This is a link to my reverbnation page and our web page http://www.reverbnation.com/blueslightning http://blueslightning.com/ ther is music form the CD there and the trio as well .]]> Sunday Songwriters Group bluenotefla https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383226 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383182 Wed, 14 Aug 2013 14:39:09 +0000
The guitar work is inspirational 8)

Suggestion:

All the other lines work great but this line could use some adjusting

"Don’t know where his going and he don’t if he comes back"

This line is ok, but try something closer to your signature tag "Life is not what you did. It's what you are doing."

...so something along the lines of "miles ahead, miles at his back"

b/c he's not a traveler/wanderer/vagabond.......he's a railroad man.....it's pretty clear to know where the railroad tracks go and they will only come back on the same tracks.......and he loves his job going back and forth on those same tracks.......so more a line about enjoying the journey instead of reaching a destination.

Thanks for sharing and welcome to SSG :mrgreen:

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383182 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383179 Wed, 14 Aug 2013 04:17:30 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group John Sargent https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-383179 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-44556 Tue, 13 Aug 2013 20:52:55 +0000
http://www.soundclick.com/LightingAndyandtwocanes

Hi this is the first time in a very long time i have posted any thing i hope I did this right . This is a rough recording of this tune it still needs work and this will be added to my song list to work on with the rest of the band . Thank you all for looking and letting me know what you think.

Railroad Man

He’s a railroad man hard and cold as steel
He’s a railroad man hard and cold as steel
All he lives for is the humming of that driven wheel

Can’t you hear them rolling down the track
Can’t you hear them rolling down the track
Don’t know where his going or if he coming back

The sound of the rails is all he can hear
It’s like a sweet, sweet women whispering in his ear
Come to me, come to me my dear

His a railroad man
He just a Railroad man
He lives for the sound of them humming of the wheels

He’s a railroad man hard and cold as steel
He’s a railroad man hard and cold as steel
All he lives for is the humming of that driven wheel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group bluenotefla https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-41/#post-44556