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Haven't Forgotten............Celt
Isn't it funny
how things have changed
What comes around goes around
It's never the same
You should have been more careful
Of the places you've tread
You should have been more careful
Of the things you said]]> Sunday Songwriters Group mpeeler3 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-47-verses/#post-340318 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-47-verses/#post-339966 Tue, 22 Sep 2009 15:41:48 +0000 I kept catching myself trying to jump ahead to the chorus. I tend to do the same thing as well...Title...Chorus.....Verse

Good starts :D

Suggestions:

Haven't Forgotten............Celt
Isn't it funny
how things have changed
What comes around goes around
Things never remain the same.......IT'S NEVER THE SAME
You should have been more careful.....YOU SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL
Of the things you did......OF THE PLACES YOU TREAD (to rhyme with 'said'...but then I had to change the line above to .............................................................use present tense for tread instead of past tense "trodden") :roll:
Should HAVE been more careful TYPO :wink:
Of the things that you said

Outside My Window is a pretty clear start of a person making a choice out of necessity instead of desire.

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-47-verses/#post-339966 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-47-verses/#post-37255 Tue, 22 Sep 2009 00:11:48 +0000
I'm still a newbie here so I'm going to start out slow. Here are my verses to a couple of titles that caught :D my eye.

Haven't Forgotten............Celt
Isn't it funny
how things have changed
What comes around goes around
Things never remain the same.
You should have been more careful
Of the things you did
Should be been more careful
Of the things that you said


Outside My Window...........James Toffee
Always on the road
Always trying to get ahead
Doing what I've got to do
To keep the family fed]]> Sunday Songwriters Group mpeeler3 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-47-verses/#post-37255