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"I could try again to fly away" stretches out longer than the other two, so it lasts as long as them put together, and it just sounds good because the end of this line grows lower. I guess you'd have to hear it. I don't have an mp3 of it, I don't have the equipment to do it. Sorry.

But thanks for the feedback.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83523 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83467 Thu, 06 Jan 2005 05:44:14 +0000
"If I was young again, I could fight again,
I could try again to fly away." This doesn't seem to have a flow though. It Might sound better like this

If I was young again, I could fight again
I could try to fly away again. With the Again at the end it seems to flow off the tongue a little sweeter and gives good repeatation.

Other then That I liked it. good job]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Dictator https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83467 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83329 Wed, 05 Jan 2005 19:00:05 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83329 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83327 Wed, 05 Jan 2005 18:52:53 +0000
really like this one.

well done.
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-83327 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-6129 Wed, 05 Jan 2005 18:11:29 +0000
If I could turn back time I might just take away my pain.
I might just take your life in vain.
I might be able to alternate the past.
I could maybe even give us a second chance.

Changing things from what they were to what they ought to be.
It's been my long dream, maybe it's a fantasy.
I don't know what would come of it.
But I know it would be better than all of this.

If I was young again, I could fight again,
I could try again to fly away.

If I could take back things that I have said,
I might do that, I might as well be dead.
I could probably find a cure to your disease.
Or I could just as well rest at ease.

I could find a way to stop the spread.
Stop the images flowing through your head.
Stop you from beating on your kids.
I'd try if I knew you'd end up like this.

If I was young again, I could fight again,
I could try again to fly away.

Yeah, I could probably change the world.
I could change all of the divorce.
I could turn things around or leave them how they were.
I might just keep things right where they are.
Consequences are a b*tch. But I learned life is all experience.
I'm proud of the way that I was raised.
I'm proud of what I am today.
If you ever ask me I will say
that I'll change d*mn nothing!

I can't change anything!
I won't change a thing!
I can't change anything!
I won't change a d*mn thing!
You can't change me. You won't change me.
I can't change me. I won't change a god d*mn thing!

If I was young again (won't change a thing!), I could fight again (won't change a thing!),
I could try again to fly away (I won't change a thing!).]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-9/#post-6129