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Congrats on writing again :D

Suggestion: Consider developing more of the story. Basically, you express the same angst in each section. Maybe have a flashback of the "good times" or maybe a reason why this is the last time because of ..........you fill in the blank........or make it something like......"here comes the last time, again"

I'd like to hear how it sounds when you get a chance :wink:

Thanks for sharing.

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-381690 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-381653 Tue, 19 Mar 2013 22:38:39 +0000
Just getting something written down is an achievement in itself when your stuck in a rut.
Looking good though, my only comment would be the bridge, as it stands it pretty much restates verse 2 so I think Id be inclined to create some point difference there. Maybe in the bridge you could talk about the future how it will be now that you've seen through her. Of course your chorus does this to a degree so you'd need to be careful you didn't restate that either.

Good to see you back

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-381653 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-381649 Tue, 19 Mar 2013 18:32:36 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group John Sargent https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-381649 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-44051 Tue, 19 Mar 2013 17:56:01 +0000
Maybe

(V1)You broke my heart once before, when you walked out through the door,
You said, "no second chance," walked out without a backward glance,
But you came back to do it all again, yeah, deja vu, it's all the same,
Packing everything you own, and leaving me in a loveless home....

(CHORUS)Well maybe, it'lll be different this time,
Maybe I'll finally be over you,
And maybe I'll get on with my life,
And for sure, I'm going to make it through....

(V2)Well you left again now you want to return, I can feel my temper starting to burn,
No fifteenth chance for you my dear, let me make it perfectly clear,
I've taken all I'm going to take, I've seen through you, you're a cheat and a fake,
And you're not walking in to resume your tricks, find another fool to get your kicks...

(CHORUS)And maybe, it'll be different this time,
Maybe I'll finally be over you,
And maybe I'll get on with my life,
And for sure, I'm going to make it through....

(BRIDGE)I've finally seen through you, finally found a little common sense,
Maybe you finally pushed too hard, but for definite you are the past tense,
I finally saw the light, the scales fell from my eyes,
Maybe you lied once too often, but for sure I've finally seen through the lies...

(CHORUS)And maybe, it'll be different this time,
Maybe I'll finally be over you,
And maybe I'll get on with my life,
And for sure, I'm going to make it through....

(CHORUS)And maybe, it'll be different this time,
Maybe I'll finally be over you,
And maybe I'll get on with my life,
And for sure, I'm going to make it through....

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Phew.... that is by far the longest dry period I've ever been through since I joined the SSG in Year 2!......OK, I know, this is nothing spectacular, but it's fun to play and easy enough to sing along at the same time....and now 'tis time to check out the Wk 20 topic!

:-) :-) :-)

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y11-w19-maybe/#post-44051