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Neil]]> Sunday Songwriters Group chefie https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-386706 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-386704 Wed, 16 Dec 2015 01:47:03 +0000
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=832466&songID=13274386

verse:

Last month I saw you on the news.
Your face was turned away.
There were comments about your radical views,
But you had nothing to say.

chorus 1:

Nobody's waiting
For you to come home.
It's been devastating
To see you throw stones.

verse:

You once wanted to be a lawyer.
Now you live by religious laws.
A masked man said you were warriors
Fighting for your cause.

chorus 1

verse:

You've always had a dark soul
Even when you were ten.
You used to torture animals.
When did you graduate to men?

chorus 2:

Now nobody's waiting
For you to come home.
Until you stop the hating
You're on your own.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Hobson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-386704 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-386663 Sat, 28 Nov 2015 17:55:44 +0000 In verse one There was something about your radical views,
But you had nothing to say. I wonder if you could be a little more specific about the radical views . . . . . . what the news said or implied about them . . . . .

In verse two You once wanted to be a lawyer.
Now you live by different laws. I'm not sure that different laws really expresses the extent of change that you want to imply. I wonder if you describe the type of laws that was lived by . . . . . or said something like making up your own laws . . . .

In the last verse We almost feel like celebrating
That you died alone. I kinda understand what you mean when you say we almost feel (felt) like celebrating . . . . but anything joyous doesn't seem to fit . . . . or it might place you in the same category as a person. Maybe something like celebrating wouldn't be enough, but you deserved to die alone.
Anyway, just some thoughts.
Belated Happy Thanksgiving!
Neil]]> Sunday Songwriters Group chefie https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-386663 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-46451 Fri, 27 Nov 2015 01:23:55 +0000
verse:

Last month I saw you on the news.
Your face was turned away.
There was something about your radical views,
But you had nothing to say.

chorus 1:

Nobody's waiting
For you to come home.
It's been devastating
To see you throw stones.

verse:

A masked man said you were warriors
Fighting for your cause.
You once wanted to be a lawyer.
Now you live by different laws.

chorus 1

verse:

You've always had a dark soul
Even when you were ten.
You used to torture animals.
When did you graduate to men?

chorus 2:

Now nobody's waiting
For you to come home.
We almost feel like celebrating
That you died alone.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Hobson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y14w4-nobodys-waiting/#post-46451