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comments appreciated:)

cheers,
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-101830 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99798 Tue, 26 Apr 2005 17:44:08 +0000
actually it's been damien rice... but I like the doors, too:)

take care,
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99798 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99552 Sun, 24 Apr 2005 14:25:09 +0000
:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99552 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99545 Sun, 24 Apr 2005 11:48:10 +0000
thanks guys!
I got chords for the "You cut my wick---you did me in"part now, but none for the first half..... if and when I got those I can tell about the 1word lines that bothered you, Beren:) thx for the nice comments.

thank you all.
cheers,
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99545 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99282 Fri, 22 Apr 2005 13:22:57 +0000 That's a lovely song. Your writing style has got alot more focused since I last dropped by this forum. Your choice of words was great. The imagery works really well.
The only bit that doesn't really work for me are the 1 word lines at the end of the first verse. I think the song would be better without them but that's just my thought.
The last 2 lines of the song are really good.
Beren]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Beren https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-99282 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98851 Tue, 19 Apr 2005 06:07:01 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98851 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98830 Tue, 19 Apr 2005 01:55:59 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98830 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98827 Tue, 19 Apr 2005 00:48:01 +0000 Closer to the earth and my
Ear to the wood
At the place we were stood
Naked feet's heat has gone
Irony creeps into my bones
Clumsy
Cold
Stone I can imagine someone lying in the foetal position with all the vulnerability that implies. The only thing that worries me is the "Stone" in the last line cos' the guy is lying on a wooden porch. I guess he is as cold as stone.

Good work.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-98827 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-8520 Mon, 18 Apr 2005 20:30:48 +0000
You cut my wick.

Trembling on the porch I lie
Closer to the earth and my
Ear to the wood
At the place we were stood
Naked feet's heat has gone
Irony creeps into my bones
Clumsy
Cold
Stone


Why would I raise my head
If there's no one else
Why would I force my lungs open
If there's no one present

Why would I bother anymore
To gain the tinder you stored

You cut my wick.
The flames are extinguished.
You cut my wick.
The craving relinquished-
You cut my wick

…and I was almost in high spirits when you did it.

You did me in.

I even have a kind of melody/how to sing it but I'm afraid it is not entirely mine- sounds a bit like a song I've been listening to a lot last week.
I'll see if I'm right or wrong/if I can figure out sth. else.

cheers,
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y2week24-you-cut-my-wick-mp3/#post-8520