https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 20:07:18 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184873 Thu, 22 Jun 2006 13:42:36 +0000
I most definately don't feel more confident , I still think I sound like someone that should never record his voice ..

But hey if the people don't mind my very off key and off pitch singing then hey what hell I'll do it ..

All loss of hearing after listening to me sing is yet to be proved medically :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184873 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184868 Thu, 22 Jun 2006 12:43:25 +0000
Tom can rest very easily I reckon


Hilch :?:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184868 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184825 Thu, 22 Jun 2006 05:54:20 +0000
I'm just catching up on things around here after
being away for a few days. This is good and I'm
glad to see (hear) you still got that Tom Waits thing
working for you.

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184825 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184798 Thu, 22 Jun 2006 03:23:07 +0000
I'm too sure about wow though :oops: :oops:

But thanks for the vote in confidence :lol: :lol: :lol:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184798 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184735 Wed, 21 Jun 2006 22:16:02 +0000 that was great, . Your guitar work sounded very convincing, and the singing was more confident as well. Well done. As far as the song goes a little suggestion would be to use a different chord progression for chorus than the verse, even just reversing the order works quite well.
I enjoyed that keep it up

cheers

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184735 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184677 Wed, 21 Jun 2006 16:26:00 +0000
For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

At the end of shows
The curtains will close
And you'll be gone with out me
You will leave me there
On that stage I will stare
At the empty seating

Back in my motel room
In darkness I'm entombed
And those clothes lay on the floor
Feeling naked and bare
Wondering who really cares
And does anyone really love me ?

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me


Sitting and waiting anticipating
Wondering if you will be there
Walking the back rooms
Nerves over ride my gloom
Cheering and laughter, for I'm on after
That 17 year old kid from there

The roar of the crowd
As they scream out loud
The bright lights , blinds my eyes
I walk to the mic I say alright
Lets get this show on the road
My heart is racing , theres no hesitating

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

Do you really love me

Do you really love me]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/paged/2/#post-184677 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-184148 Mon, 19 Jun 2006 02:58:53 +0000
It fits really well and is what I was looking for

Thanks Bob]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-184148 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-184027 Sun, 18 Jun 2006 15:39:56 +0000
The rewrite is a big improvement and expands on the original idea very well. My only problem is the line

There's only loneliness and doom

I know the idea you're trying to get over but this line just seems poor compared to the rest of the song and in my own way pulls the rest of the song down.

I'd be tempted to go with something like

Back in my motel room
In darkness and gloom
Those clothes lay on the floor

or

Back in my motel room
In darkness I'm entombed
and Those clothes lay on the floor

Just a suggestion (and not a brilliant one either) but I'd try to get away from the room/doom rhyme

Otherwise good stuff

Bob :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-184027 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-183856 Sat, 17 Jun 2006 11:00:52 +0000
Chorus

V1

V2

CHORUS

V3

( maybe another verse ?)

CHORUS

OUTRO

I like the chorus at the start I think it really sets the mood for the song ..


? would that be better ?????

Alternative verse 4

The roar of the crowd
As they scream out loud
The bright lights , blinds my eyes
I walk to the mic I say alright
Lets get this show on the road
My heart is racing , theres no hesitating ]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-183856 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-183689 Fri, 16 Jun 2006 14:48:23 +0000
:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y4-wk32-do-you-know-me-complete-edited-version-mp3/#post-183689