https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y6week49-random-static-on-the-radio/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 01:51:25 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y6week49-random-static-on-the-radio/#post-33644 Thu, 09 Oct 2008 14:55:15 +0000 Hope you don't me fooling around with your great first lines. (the outcome is singable, too, I think... did a quick vocals only demo so you get an idea... feel free to listen here and be gentle :wink: )

1. pbee
And you say it's gotta be me or none at all
I say it's gotta be you or none at all
We force a smile to our lips
But, of course, you do win
And I open the goddam.n letter

2. pbee
I saw you walking in the sunlight
Nodding your head to a birdsong
Swaying your arms like wings
And I remembered you at a door front
In mackintosh and wellington boots

3. SlowPlay (Vic)
I've got all the natural rhythm of a traffic accident,
See, there's mornings when it's no use to run or shout warnings
And I've got all the required feeble clumsiness
To stop'n'go, to watch'n'wreck any day before noon

4. dhodge
You think you're really something
of a paranoid and you might just got a point
but yesterday I kept turning my head
on a train ride in broad daylight
for the sound of an elevator
imitating horror movie scores
kept churning my thread-
bare patience all right

5. Alan Green
We carved our names on the trees
In the latest of his poetry
And you wondered at breakfast
With the letter in one and a
Marmelade jar in the other hand
“isn't it ‘in' the trees, what do you think?”
Well, I wondered how we could be this happy
In his well-nurtured, plotted dream

6. Alan Green
Talk to me don't talk to me
When I'm almost out of the door
Frozen strawberries on the floor
There's a note in your song I
Think I have not heard before

Hope you can live with some of these :D
Cheers,
straycat.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y6week49-random-static-on-the-radio/#post-33644