https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 01:13:03 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327950 Tue, 05 May 2009 08:31:17 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327950 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327949 Tue, 05 May 2009 08:16:41 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group buk skywoker https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327949 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327531 Wed, 29 Apr 2009 01:55:22 +0000 James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327531 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327508 Tue, 28 Apr 2009 18:58:34 +0000

A :-)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327508 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327500 Tue, 28 Apr 2009 16:03:06 +0000 Thanks for the listen and feedback. I was just about to post the change of the word "our" to "your" then I take a look-see at yours. :wink:
James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327500 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327499 Tue, 28 Apr 2009 15:56:49 +0000
I really like this one - a real 'feel good' tune. Very nicely put together and great to listen to.... :D

Rock on!
D 8)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group DylanBarrett https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327499 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327483 Tue, 28 Apr 2009 04:32:46 +0000
....but if you listen closely to the end of "Niquiwi Burning" you can hear dramatic music and screaming as they were watching Mulan 2 in the room because the wife wanted the other tv for CNN...I thought it added a dramatic touch to the song :lol: Hey, before I leave . . . wipe that grin off your face Wipe indeed :wink: :lol:
I like it even if I have to come up with a new idea John,
Sorry, my friend. Looks like I owe you a trip to the ice-cream shop :wink: I enjoy the double on the Sunday/Sundae imagery I kind of stumbled onto it...I was having a hard time finding an angle for "half-way" so something just clicked to word play with another word then associate it.... Use of the word your would reinforce that idea. IMHO Jay and John,
Ok guys "your" it is!

Thanks all for the feedback! :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327483 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327459 Tue, 28 Apr 2009 00:24:52 +0000
I like it even if I have to come up with a new idea.
I enjoy the double on the Sunday/Sundae imagery.

I understand both views on the our/your line.
My personal preference would be for your.
It seems the song is about you giving of yourself for
this other person.

Use of the word your would reinforce that idea. IMHO

:note1: :note1: :note1:

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327459 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327436 Mon, 27 Apr 2009 18:23:46 +0000 Are the kids dancing around when you record . . . or is it a no-fly zone when recording?

Hey, before I leave . . . wipe that grin off your face :?

KR2]]> Sunday Songwriters Group KR2 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327436 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327433 Mon, 27 Apr 2009 17:17:10 +0000
Thanks for the reply and suggestion. and please continue to nit pick away I appreciate it :mrgreen:

>"leave our worries at the door" -> "leave your worries at the door"

You have a very valid point about the change. I thought about that line when I was writing it...my concern would be that it would sound less authentic as a friendship....and feeling more like seeing a shrink in the office instead of 2 friends venting at an ice-cream shop..."our" seemed more empathetic.....but I will definitely keep thinking it through.

Thanks again. :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y7-wk26-half-way/#post-327433