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Good start :D Looks like an interesting and messy relationship gone wrong.

Suggestion: Consider clarifying this line:
"I used to pay cash all the time"
I don't know if it is intended, but this line makes it sound like the singee is a prostitute

I'm still no good at figuring these original songs by lyrics only. I'll have to wait for Ken to post the answer :lol:

Thanks for sharing.

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y8-wk43/#post-358448 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y8-wk43/#post-39832 Fri, 27 Aug 2010 16:40:56 +0000
Something jazzy perhaps.


I used to chase kites through the sky
I used to know what, where and why
That's what I underrated
It's become so complicated
With you

I used to pay cash all the time
I used to know that you were mine
But things are now adrift dear
I'm missing what you once were
To me

Cause falling out of love
Is like a bump along the wayside
You fight between your heart
And your head is saying goodbye
And time it goes and ticks away
Ticks away another day
And every girl that comes along
Could play the lead in the next song

I used to fight truth on the line
I used to spin lies to make you mine
But now it seems so simple
Those things I did would only
Hurt you

Cause falling out of love
Is like a bump along the wayside
You fight between your heart
And your head is saying goodbye
And time it goes and ticks away
Ticks away another day
And every girl that comes along
Could play the lead in the next song]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jaythejoker https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/y8-wk43/#post-39832