https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 21:31:26 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60787 Sat, 15 May 2004 16:59:02 +0000 how is school going, update me ok !!!!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60787 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60785 Sat, 15 May 2004 16:51:04 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60785 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60740 Fri, 14 May 2004 11:17:50 +0000
Time, go backwards, I left myself behind
as my thoughts ripple forward
in the shadows of my mind

Which is essentially what I used for last week's exercise. Then I added the second verse last week, because simply melding Marv's and Jamir's lines together was effortless. So I wanted to add something. So those particular lines you mentioned, Maxwell, were mostly my words, but draped over Jamir's framework. She did the hard work, and I just changed the color a bit for the second verse. But I'm glad you liked it.

-- Scratch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group scratchmonkey https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60740 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60737 Fri, 14 May 2004 07:26:36 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group MarvelousOptimist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60737 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60733 Fri, 14 May 2004 05:40:39 +0000
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind

???]]> Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60733 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60716 Thu, 13 May 2004 23:58:35 +0000 this is excellent... i love the way the mind is wandering......have copied and pasted it to add to what I have in mind to mix it around, with your permission of course..... I'm not going to ask you if you have a tune for this one though.... not until i hear "midnight blue" :cry: I have the patience of as saint :wink:

go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60716 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60714 Thu, 13 May 2004 23:21:57 +0000
"Two Dollars"

The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I never even noticed I'd been crying
Time, go backwards, I left myself behind
as your memory rippled forward
in the shadows of my mind

(chorus)
I didn't hear you say goodbye
I just smiled
And waved there
beneath the waves where
I saw in soft focus
And moved in slow motion
And mouthed the words
But never heard a sound
"See you around" I said
"See you around"

And your voice is so musical
from deep inside this tunnel,
I swear I never noticed you were lying
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind

(chorus)

(ending)
And all you left behind
Was your outline in the pillow
A few unwanted clothes
Your key, my name
Two dollars change
And me

-Marv]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MarvelousOptimist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60714 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60712 Thu, 13 May 2004 21:31:58 +0000
I am hoping you and Marv are gonna help me come up with another verseor 2 , around the theme, using the puddle from the tears, as a backdrop to going into the dream world if you catch my drift of thoughts!!!!
you know starring into the puddle mezmorised kinda thing
go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60712 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60677 Wed, 12 May 2004 22:02:39 +0000
-- Scratch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group scratchmonkey https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-60677 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-2-ssg-28-jamir/#post-2389 Tue, 11 May 2004 21:15:14 +0000 thanks to Marv and Scratch


The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I never even noticed I'd been crying
Time, go backwards, I left myself behind
as your memory rippled forward
in the shadows of my mind

And your voice is so musical
from deep inside this tunnel,
I swear I never noticed you were lying
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind

Chorus

Just whispers in a dream
Come to life in my mind
……………………Or reality
what will I wake to find

maybe just a dream within a dream


Go well
Ja'mir
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