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Keep up the good work
Bstguitarist
KB1LQC]]> Sunday Songwriters Group bstguitarist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-3-week-1/#post-75367 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-3-week-1/#post-4801 Mon, 08 Nov 2004 22:53:06 +0000 I think I have mentioned this before but I do most of my writing at work when I have a spare minute or twenty. :wink: So this come from my rather uninspiring office.
As always, let me know what you think.

TheJackal.

Outside the Box

This 8 foot box is lifeless nothing hangs upon the walls
They're white and plain save a few scuffs and 6 foot of brown with a handle
The desk surrounds me I face the walls my back towards the door
Take a hint people

Chorus
All day I stare at white washed walls
But that's not what I feel at all
I feel her cool white wash upon my feet
I'm sitting here in shoes and socks
But I'm thinking now outside the box
12 horizons separate us but I'm still on that sandy beach


If I took 12 steps id be at the window staring out at her
She's not half bad but I'm really thinking of her sister on the other side
Bluer than blue and clearer than clear she heals all that enter
Have you been healed

Chorus
All day I stare at white washed walls
But that's not what I feel at all
I feel her cool white wash upon my feet
I'm sitting here in shoes and socks
But I'm thinking now outside the box
12 horizons separate us but I'm still on that sandy beach

Days roll by and unlike me this box remains unchanged
She has changed too I know she has but outside the box she is just the same
My memory of her will never fade and her cool burns inside me
My love revealed

Chorus
All day I stare at white washed walls
But that's not what I feel at all
I feel her cool white wash upon my feet
I'm sitting here in shoes and socks
But I'm thinking now outside the box
12 horizons separate us but I'm still on that sandy beach]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TheJackal https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-3-week-1/#post-4801