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cheers,
straycat.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-299318 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298674 Mon, 30 Jun 2008 05:37:07 +0000
And thanks for the proof reading Vic.

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298674 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298666 Mon, 30 Jun 2008 04:30:14 +0000
Not your usual style - one-line chorus - re-cycled title - and postcards.

Reads well - I can almost taste those Margaritas! I can imagine this done with a liting, laid-back reggae feel...look forward to hearing it. And as for steel drums - must be a municipal dump somewhere near you? Nothing like making your own!

Oh, one tiny thing - the pedant in me is compelled to point something out..."Their serving drinks...." Their? THEY'RE!!!! Tsk, tsk, John!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298666 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298644 Mon, 30 Jun 2008 01:09:50 +0000 Jimmy Buffet with some country twang . . . cocktails in paradise.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group KR2 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298644 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298637 Sun, 29 Jun 2008 22:57:12 +0000
Do you know where I can get a steel drum cheap?]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298637 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298636 Sun, 29 Jun 2008 22:27:23 +0000
That reads pretty well.

Can't wait to hear it! 8)
(Got my sunglasses out in anticipation!)

Have you got it worked up yet????

Ken]]> Sunday Songwriters Group CitiZenNoir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-298636 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-32393 Sun, 29 Jun 2008 22:23:13 +0000
It's more of a postcard with a Jimmy Buffet feel to it.

As a matter of fact as I was writing this I got this image
of Jimmy and Toby Keith in a video for this.

They would be doing all the type of things that one really wouldn't
wish their spouses to witness(drinking, bikini girls,ect, you know)
and at the end have said spouses show up.(OOPS)

I think I also managed to get that simple sing along chorus
assignment from Week 2 in here also

Wish You Were Here

There's a cool breeze off the ocean
Soaking up the sun and the scenery
But my mind returns to one notion
Wishing that you were here with me

Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here

They're serving drinks with those little umbrellas
Reggae in the bar until late at night
Having good times here with the fellas
Still there's one little thing that just ain't right

Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here

(Bridge)
There is nothing like watching sunset
While sitting on the beach here in Paradise
Let me say it again before I forget
Wish you were here to make it twice as nice

Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here

There's a cool breeze off the ocean
Soaking up the sun and the scenery
But my mind returns to one notion
Wishing that you were here with me

Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here
Wish You Were Here...

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/year-6-wk-35-wk-2-wish-you-were-here/#post-32393