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Thanks Again!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-80619 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-79368 Sat, 11 Dec 2004 19:01:05 +0000
I will never feel
Just how real
It must be inside
To live those lives
Drink the wine from the wells
Fall the holes are heros fell

but I was wondering if the "are" of the last line is suppose to be "our". I really think the last verse is really good at expressing the feeling of being the one left behind. And the line "To walk a tight rope everyday
Playing someone elses game" I think is great stuff.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MikeM https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-79368 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-78668 Tue, 07 Dec 2004 16:12:32 +0000
This song sends shivers down my spine. Very good...

But, here comes the critic:

I think that the last two lines of the chorus (I'll be coming home) are too positive after all that darkness. Suddenly he/she is coming home? Maybe he/she want to, but is there a home to go to?

Maybe you could write another verse to come after the chorus to explain it more. In my opinion it's about a guy whose girl just left and the title "We'll never know" would then mean they they'll never know if it could work out.

Summarizing: It's a very dark and compelling song, only a little vague. It's like the second verse is about someone else.

Keep on writing,
Christiaan.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Christiaan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-78668 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-78464 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 12:10:47 +0000
I thougth this was going very well then all of a sudden it ended , sorry but I think it is missing something maybe a bridge between chorus and last verse maybe .

Oh well I've had my say

so for so good though

cheers
:D :D]]> Sunday Songwriters Group lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-78464 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-5353 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 02:36:21 +0000

We'll Never Know

V
Its been so long
Since youve been gone
And i never knew
Just what to do
Maybe i should stop and think
Of all i have, what i could give
Id say that i could make a change
But thats the biggest lie that i could say


C
I have been to long alone
Didnt know which way to go
So much right, was so damn wrong
But now ill be coming home
Ill be coming home

V
I will never feel
Just how real
It must be inside
To live those lives
To walk a tight rope everyday
Playing someone elses game
Drink the wine from the wells
Fall the holes are heros fell]]> Sunday Songwriters Group +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr-3-wk-5-well-never-know/#post-5353