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like this especially

So blow the dust of your heart
And you will see the sun
Theres so much left for you
Your life has just begun

I am a bit confused by the two long verses though ,the shorter ones flow really well, but I don't get that feeling with the longer ones.

Go wel
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-88367 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87709 Tue, 01 Feb 2005 07:02:48 +0000 Only thing that bothered me was using the word mess three times in two lines... i would try and cut that down to one...

Well hes cleaning up the mess upon the city streets
But there's one in his life that he cannot clean

something like that. everything else is spot on.

good writing,
sozay]]> Sunday Songwriters Group sozay https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87709 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87592 Mon, 31 Jan 2005 07:57:27 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group xposed https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87592 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87559 Mon, 31 Jan 2005 02:38:00 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-87559 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-6770 Mon, 31 Jan 2005 01:27:06 +0000 Light It Up

Well hes cleaning up the mess upon the city streets
But the mess now in his life is one mess he cannot clean
Behind all the tin cans and all of the rubbish piles
Is one thing that keeps him going, a strangers glowing smile

So blow the dust of your heart
And you will see the sun
Theres so much left for you
Your life has just begun

Well hes covered in battles scars and bathed in the dirt
Cleaning up grafitied walls and writing broken words
There was never enough time in his lonely life to see
Whats beneath all the mess down on the city streets

So blow the dust of your heart
And you will see the sun
Theres so much left for you
Your life has just begun

Pull back the blanket
Of this stary sky
Fly through the ribbons
Of this beautiful life

So blow the dust of your heart
And you will see the sun
Theres so much left for you
Your life has just begun]]> Sunday Songwriters Group +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/yr3-wk13-light-it-up/#post-6770