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05/01/2005 3:49 pm
This song is a sensitive one. I have gotten into so much touble with the law and have been sent to boot camp and visited Juvi so many times and I am ashamed of it. But what really scares me is when I wonder if my little brother will go down that same path. I don't think that he will because he knows that I'm trying to change, but the thought is still there.
Christopher
You strive and seek to find. To find another way to be.
Invade inside of me. I feel your presence keeping death at bay.
The end of you is the end of me. Insane how it works out that way.
I'd end myself to save your life. Remember me until your dying day.
The pain when you were gone comes back to haunt me.
What I felt when you were gone comes back to torment me.
This is the first time that I've apologized.
I've put you through so much sh*t. You are the only thing keeping me alive
You are my only hope. Don't disappoint me.
Trample my path, create your own. Don't follow me.
The pain when you were gone comes back to haunt me.
What I felt when you were gone comes back to torment me.
Now I see you for who you really are.
A spinning image of me.
My footsteps fit you well.
Don't disapoint me.
Now I see you for who you really are.
A spinning image of me.
My footsteps fit you well.
Don't follow my ways.
The pain when you were gone comes back to haunt me.
What I felt when you were gone comes back to torment me.
Don't make me hate myself. Don't turn out like me.
Become your own. Become a man. Don't disapoint me.
Don't turn out like me. I don't even like me.
I would hate you if you are me.
I hate what I've become.
I, too, will change with you.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
05/01/2005 4:19 pm
Pierson..hi......WOW...
food for thought...Don't follow my ways. ....to...keep yours(self) free..
and...you if you are me......to ....for you to become me..or..if you become me......your deep.....I like that!...me too...is that healthy??? :P
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
05/01/2005 7:15 pm
DEEP and touching man, awesome lyrics. this seems like a very personal song so i don't wanna say to much but do you have any music to accompany it?i'd like to hear if you do? if not do you know what kind song you want it to be?
chad
05/01/2005 9:11 pm
wow man, wow...that right there is something straight from the heart...i can feel that man..felt the emotion from that. I know the message. great song...nice imagery and metaphors and similes...i love it.
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
06/01/2005 1:29 am
Simply Amazing. Anyone who reads that knows it was written with feeling and passion. Keep up the great work.
06/01/2005 1:30 am
Simply Amazing. Anyone who reads that knows it was written with feeling and passion. Keep up the great work.
My thoughts exactly Bonzai_man.
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
Topic starter
06/01/2005 3:01 pm
Yeah it is pretty emotional. (but it is healthy for me, cooker)
I have music for it, but I don't have access to record it and put it on an mp3 for u guys. Sorry.
I was debating whether or not I should post this, but now I'm glad I did.
Glad you liked it!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
07/01/2005 2:19 am
Pierson, i know i've read this song before, but it seems to get more powerful everytime man. Keep up the good work. We'll have to get some music going soon, to fit with all these lyrics.
p.s du bist schiede
Got Metal?
07/01/2005 4:35 am
Pierson..In the right dose it`s healthy for me also,, we all need a little introspection and self awareness. I think I sent you a couple PM`s also regarding some of your earlier posts...cooker
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
Topic starter
07/01/2005 2:40 pm
Cooker, I haven't yet gotten any of your pm's. I don't know why.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
07/01/2005 4:22 pm
Pierson,Hi...sent the PM as a post...also do you have chords for Christopher? cooker
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
Topic starter
09/01/2005 1:05 am
I do have a beat in my mind for this song. Haven't found the right chords yet.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!