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Topic starter
17/01/2005 10:35 pm
tell me what you think and what you think the song is about and whether it touched you in some way? that would be appreciated!
playground pain
Memories leave me with an ache
A dull pain I cant get rid of
Time has left me frozen
I know I'll never know them
I cant move on because I miss you
Those frosty mornings leave me shattered
A dark shadow that wont seem to die
We would shiver and chatter
Coz nothing ever mattered
I wish nothing mattered right now
I miss those Sundays when you used to call me
And tell me about your day
I miss those Mondays when I would see you
And everybody looked the same
Oh have a nice day today
Bring me smiles in the rain
I don't think I could ever face
That playground pain again
Oh how we all loved it there
You can laugh away your cares
I long for the pain
Wash the ink out of my hair
I've got so many hanging battles
A sword in my hand that just wont leave
My shield is shiny gold
And my hands are always cold
I cant move on because I miss you
This masquerade is wearing tired
A jagged edge that's out for you
I tried to tell you straight
But my words failed me again
I wish I knew exactly what to say
I miss those Sundays when you used to call me
And tell me about your day
I miss those Mondays when I would see you
And everybody looked the same
Oh have a nice day today
Bring me smiles in the rain
I don't think I could ever face
That playground pain again
But oh how we loved it there
You can laugh away your cares
I long for the pain
Wash the ink out of my hair
18/01/2005 6:31 am
high school sweethearts? seeing your lover outside during lunch time or something? that's what it makes me think of anyways. i like the lyrics and they are touching good job
chad
18/01/2005 9:06 am
Wow!!, I really really like this peice!!.....definetly captured a lot of feelings in there......a lot i can relate to so im guessing a lot that everyone can relate to......I honestly cant say anything that id personally change....n it reminds me personally of the nights that id sneak out with my g/f in the cold...or like was sed above ^....young play ground love...............thumbs up!! :mrgreen: .....
Really like it, keep um going!!
NeM
Rain Shadow
Topic starter
18/01/2005 10:40 am
thanks for the response! glad you got something from it! for me it was about friends in high school and also being bullied, i had a really good time with my true friends and miss them greatly but then i also had a really bad time being bullied and couldnt go through it again!
18/01/2005 10:44 am
oh right, yeah i know how you feel and i can see it when it i read back now....makes the song even more emotional, wow.....really really good song!!!!!
Rain Shadow
Topic starter
18/01/2005 1:46 pm
thank you! ive actually just writeen another song with music this time (just an acoustic on a shitty microphone and the comp) but i dont know to to upload it!