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22/12/2004 9:28 pm
This is the game game game
where no one wins
we are always running
but theres an invisible wall
the last call of the game
will always be a shame
This is the game game game
where no one wins
Fighting against our own soul and minds
where we fight for what we confide in
the world collapsing upon itself
all because of your destructive self
This is the game game game
where no one wins
the lights are bright and blinding
losing all of our confiding
and we fight for all of this
the small peice of self bliss
and for everytime we miss
theres a penalty called
and someone is always mauled
by this
Game Game Game Where No One Wins
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
Topic starter
23/12/2004 3:33 pm
guess it sucks... :o
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
23/12/2004 9:23 pm
hi D D
It always amazes me when people don't get a reply straight away :
guess it sucks... ( D D wrote )
well this is my 5 cents worth if it means anything to you D D
( Game Game Game ) don't work for me
maybe try this ?
This is the game of life
then change last line , first verse
will always be a shame
to
you will always be in strife
take or leave it but you said it sucked not me
cheers
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03/01/2005 8:32 pm
yes yes, that whole repeating game 3 times doesnt work...although the repetition of it in each verse has a very good effect. I liked that. Other than that, I liked the song. It puzzles me on the theme tho...would you mind telling me? Great song tho...sounds emotional. Great work.
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05/01/2005 5:19 pm
hi DD....for the most part the words are okay...I just wasn`t convinced they are placed in the "right " order....try swapping line posistions,,,seems like to many lines ending with the same rhyme are too close together....makes it hard to follow flow-wise...I think it just needs more work.....cooker
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