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Topic starter
04/01/2005 7:28 pm
Heres a song I previously posted that has been revised. I have to say without the help of "MusicManiac221" would have never becaome this good. Please post your thoughts on this song. Tell us what you think, or just give advice if you want!
To The One I Love
Verse1
I blow a kiss to the one I love
The wind will carry it through the midnight sun
I hope it keeps you safe in the dark
and through my dreams you will forever run
[Chorus]
C'mon girl just one last chance
Can I have just one more kiss
All I want is to hold you tight
And have you bathe in my endless love
Verse2
Every morning I lay in bed and think
Of how you hate me for everything
Maybe tomorrow we can be friends again
And you will give me a second chance
[Chorus]
C'mon girl just one last chance
Can I have just one more kiss
All I want is to hold you tight
And have you bathe in my endless love
Verse3
I walk along this empty road                                  Â
With no ending in my sight
I look to the sky,and I'm reminded of you
I wonder if you'll walk with me
Will you walk with me again?
[Bridge]
C'mon
C'mon
C'mon
C'mon (Repeat x2)***
C'mon girl give me one more chance
All I want is that one last chance
Can I have just one more chance?
Special K
04/01/2005 7:31 pm
Well man, I already know this song and to me it sounds wonderful. Great work and thanks for asking for my work. Keep on writin'. I really like the bridge you have. very, very nice man!
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
04/01/2005 7:57 pm
i love this song, flows nice, do you have a mp3.? file i can listen to, and whats your beat/tempo for this piece?
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
Topic starter
04/01/2005 8:05 pm
Theres no Mp3 for this song because I just started writing and have no idea how to record it. I have been messing around with some stuff and iam still trying to come up with some guitar accompaniment for this song. I have a metronome on my computer i think it would be Adagio(68) whatever that means.
Special K
04/01/2005 8:06 pm
i smell some power chords...
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
Topic starter
04/01/2005 8:06 pm
It might be a little faster pace then that iam still not too sure, iam trying to sort it out.
Special K
Topic starter
04/01/2005 8:13 pm
It might be a little faster pace then that iam still not too sure, iam trying to sort it out.
Special K
04/01/2005 8:15 pm
yeah i was thinking of a faded guitar/bass/drums at 4/4 or slower, or a fast pace kind of punk song at 1/4 *or faster, depending on capabilities of players*.... 0.o where do i come up with this stuff
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
04/01/2005 8:19 pm
no idea what u just said...
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
Topic starter
04/01/2005 8:39 pm
Originally i was going to do this as a slower type song but i just tried it with some power chords and it sounds fits nice, it sounds more like a rock song sorta now.
Special K
04/01/2005 8:49 pm
great song man, theres nothing i would change! In my head it wasnt really rocky though it was kinda slow?