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03/04/2005 11:28 pm
As it's getting dark outside
and I'am walking home.
The cold quickly comes over me,
I kind finally scream.
But when you are a stranger like I,
the cold always muffles the cries.
And all that is left is a weak little sigh
As the sun says its goodbyes
But the street lights are glowin
The moon has a rosen...tonight
The stars shine brightly
The city is sleeping.....tonight
As I finally see my home in the distance,
the dark turns into a timeless existence.
And as the feeling of lonileness lingers
th suns mighty rays turn into tiny slimmers.
But the street lights are glowin
The moon has a rosen...tonight
The stars shine brightly
The city is sleeping......tonight 2x
04/04/2005 6:52 am
Nice work
I specially love this verse
But when you are a stranger like I,
the cold always muffles the vries.
And all that is left is a weak little sigh
As the sun says its goodbyes
bright!
My opinion is... make it simple.... you wont remember that lyrics with all those strange words ex. "th suns mighty ray turn into tiny slimmers"
Nice story... just work the timing of words and it'll rock
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13/04/2005 9:35 pm
Any other thoughts are welcomed
15/04/2005 3:24 pm
i don't know what the fourth line means.