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05/03/2004 10:34 pm
hey this is my first ever song on here so plz give me some feedback and opinions :D
*stupid misconceptions*
thinking back to when we first met
the things i said ill never regret
but the pain and despair was too hard to hide
i finnaly seen what your like your on the inside
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another stupid misconception
just another stupid misconception
another stupid misconception
just another stupid misconception
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you made me look like a fool
and you used me like a tool
i thought you were for real
but its really no big deal
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i know it aint a very good song but its my first so plz dont take the p*** too much
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06/03/2004 8:55 am
hey every1 I just thought I'd show you a newer version. I'm in a band with Dale so I gave him a help with the lyrics and we came up with this.
thinking back to when we first met
the things i said ill never regret
but the pain and despair was too hard to hide
i finnaly seen what your like inside
just another stupid misconception
you can't look at your reflection
your greed wont go without detection
its not something i would mention
you made me look like a fool
and you used me like a tool
you always turn up late
but your not worth the wait
07/03/2004 6:32 pm
You guys are in a band together? That's cool! 8)
I liked both versions of the song. You guys should try to put some music to it now. Maybe use the chorus from the first version also. I can almost hear some kind of pained chords & lyrics there. Keep it up guys.
"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge
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07/03/2004 6:49 pm
thx ye were in a band and thats our new song
rock on us m,/ ;D we are going to use the second version of the song joined with some bridges and a bass solo which shud be pretty kool
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