SSG5 - Week 26 - True Lies - mp3

pbee · 2007-05-01T05:28:32Z

This song is definitely out of my comfort zone. I don't really write ballads, in fact I think this is the first one I've written. Trying to narrate a story as well as exploring a topic that is potentially polarizing was certainly a challenge for me. Anyway as always comments are welcome. True LiesÂ© 2007 Copyright Paul Brady V1He's a boy of eighteen she's thirty and keenAnd youth's such a waste on the youngAnd a chance to relive what she wouldn't giveTo step back in time with this oneV2So she paints up her face and wraps up the prizeShe can pass for a much younger squeezeAnd why should she care just as long as he's thereThough she plays this part with uneasechorusCos everybody lies sometimesAnd sometimes it's not what you sayAnd sometimes it's simply the way that you smileA smile she's not feeling insideV3So she leaves for the date don't want to be lateShe knows the clock is still tickingAnd she hopes that this time she'll discover the loveAnd the end of this game that it bringschorusCos everybody lies sometimesAnd sometimes it's not what you sayAnd sometimes it's simply the way that you smileA smile she's not feeling inside

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Topic starter 06/05/2007 6:48 am

Thanks everyone for the feedback. SP thanks mate, I find that this song grows on me as time goes on so I'm going I will leave it as is.

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Paul

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