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22/11/2006 2:52 pm
Nice Rewrite,
You really are improving Trevor. I'm with Vic.
This sounds very Springsteenesque to me.
Good Job
John
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24/11/2006 9:43 pm
Thanks for so much feed back everyone really really do appreciate it
Just have to learn to play and sing now , so you can all have a listen ...
Thank you
Trevor....
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
26/11/2006 9:19 am
Hi Trevor
Definitely one of your best here - good capture of the mood.
Just one very minor suggestion on top of everyone elses
Nothing but a glorified office clerk
to
Just a glorified office clerk
Sits better with me and gives more impact.
Really good stuff
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well
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