Check this one out... called I Wish

don't worry i'm telling the truth not trying to be nice. thanks for the compliment, my hopes is to become a singer we'll see how that works out. i write my own songs because i don't want to be a singer that doesn't write their own songs i think that's corny. And don't worry i won't stop writing songs.

also, i suggest you keep posting songs, not to me specifically but to see what others have to say. i'm only 15 so i don't know everything about songwriting.

I post a few songs a few weeks ago but I got no response. No biggy since the songs kinda sucked (they were my first three).

So I decided to go on the offensive and review other people's songs while writing my own. It's kinda fun.

i never realized those ones. i'll go check 'em out and tell you what i think of them. and post more sometime soon i liked the two you showed me.